>>527続き
>>521>>523ニューロさん。
14行目　The story broadcasted really was a result of bunch of fabrications and edits.
→　It was a bunch of fabrications made by editing that was actually broadcasted!
15行目　meant nostalgic but they did not mention the Paiwan people meant
→　meant nostalgic for Paiwan peaple, but they did not mention the meaning in the program.
16行目　soの前にカンマをつける。

17行目　Is the term Japan-Taiwanese war after ceding Formosa to Japan justified?
　　　　→Can the term 'Japan-Taiwan War' after ceding of Taiwan-island to Japan be justified?
18行目　Did　→　Had
19行目　literally →　really
20行目　in the context of the program （番組の前後関係に照らし合わせると）だと
、とらえ方によってYesの答えがかえってしまいます。
ここは、（彼が言った全ての言葉に照らし合わせて）in the context of his whole speech
もしくはin the context of all what he saidのほうがいいのでは？