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OK, I will correct your little essay for you. (sigh...

I don't live in Tokyo, so I have never heard Ms. Kawakami's performance.
But, from Mr. Takamoto's criticism, I can feel that Ms. Kawakami's performance
is worth hearing, because her extraordinary virtuosity sounds like "Baaaaaang!".
Mr. Takamoto's presentation about this point is very clear even to one who has not
heard the pianist's performance actually yet. This is the proof of Mr. Takamoto's excellent criticism.